Hello, I liked your novel very much. I'm a translator from Russia, and I'm part of a project that translates short stories for Russian mortals, and I'd really like to translate your short story into Russian, can I do that?
like seriously. Ive been reading vns for years... and i've never once read one that opened with such.... intensity. Especially one that I connected with so thoroughly. Believe you me, I was INVESTED.
But it was more than that. The Author portrayed my own father in exact detail. except... instead of his.... behavior caused by the loss of another, it was in fact due to me being gay.
As much as it hurt to read this, it put things into perspective for me. even with such a short intro to the VN, I will definitely be here for the long haul.
Not to nag, but it actually could be "seal." All it would take is the removal of the comma. (If it stays in, then, yes, "sealed" is the correct version)
For example, remove "lash out against our servants, and" and you get, "He would seal himself away in his study for days on end."
No you're right, it's just the first thought that came to mind as the current version was incorrect. :) It's funny because I had thought that "would seal himself away" as another alternative.
oh god here we go again... HOLD ON TO YOUR HEADS PEOPLE! IT'S FRENCH REVOLUTION TIME! *in the background* (wai- wait wait a minute the French revolution didn't start in the 18th century? [no I'm fairly sure it did just around the tail end of it going into the 19th century maybe? You know after our country's revolution.] oh yeah forgot about that WELL SHIT! NOW THIS COMMENT IS GOING TO BE POSSIBLY INACCURATE! Well there's nothing to be done about it now already was going to post the damn thing so I'll just the let the even better history buff's tear into this comment in the comment section...) {sorry I just felt I had to post this feel free to rip this comment apart if need be!}
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I hope this vn continues.
yo I realy liked this update and am quite intrigued how it will continue.
Great update!!
Stay safe..
So, I noticed that Leon looks older/more built in the title screen illustration.
Assuming this isn't spoiler territory, is there a time skip/training montage/supernatural event planned in the future to explain this?
I can't go into detail but there will be a brief time skip later down the line
Can't wait to see the twink to hunk transformation ๐
yaaay, update coming soon!!
Hello, I liked your novel very much. I'm a translator from Russia, and I'm part of a project that translates short stories for Russian mortals, and I'd really like to translate your short story into Russian, can I do that?
like seriously. Ive been reading vns for years... and i've never once read one that opened with such.... intensity. Especially one that I connected with so thoroughly. Believe you me, I was INVESTED.
But it was more than that. The Author portrayed my own father in exact detail. except... instead of his.... behavior caused by the loss of another, it was in fact due to me being gay.
As much as it hurt to read this, it put things into perspective for me. even with such a short intro to the VN, I will definitely be here for the long haul.
"He would lash out against our servants, and sealed himself away in his study for days on end."
I'm loving the setup so far! A good start always leaves you with questions.
Not to nag, but it actually could be "seal." All it would take is the removal of the comma. (If it stays in, then, yes, "sealed" is the correct version)
For example, remove "lash out against our servants, and" and you get, "He would seal himself away in his study for days on end."
No you're right, it's just the first thought that came to mind as the current version was incorrect. :) It's funny because I had thought that "would seal himself away" as another alternative.
oh god here we go again... HOLD ON TO YOUR HEADS PEOPLE! IT'S FRENCH REVOLUTION TIME! *in the background* (wai- wait wait a minute the French revolution didn't start in the 18th century? [no I'm fairly sure it did just around the tail end of it going into the 19th century maybe? You know after our country's revolution.] oh yeah forgot about that WELL SHIT! NOW THIS COMMENT IS GOING TO BE POSSIBLY INACCURATE! Well there's nothing to be done about it now already was going to post the damn thing so I'll just the let the even better history buff's tear into this comment in the comment section...) {sorry I just felt I had to post this feel free to rip this comment apart if need be!}
It's the french revolution but with dragons, it can start when it wants to
The French revolution was in the 17th century and ended in the same century my guy
the 1700's are 18th century.
I just looked that up and now I feel stupid, sorry about that.
Wow! Really dark materials right there. I love it!
Looks good so far, looking forward for more! Keep up the good work! :)
When you say that the first build is dropping soon, what do you mean?
cannot wait to start playing this!
Vajra! This is where you have been hiding...
Very interesting premise, is there a planned release date for it?
The first build is dropping very soon.
Very much looking forward to it!
Como se descarga?
lol mc he is dead i am calling it
Good lord that is one hell of a compelling premise